![]() ![]() A lot of thought and conversation has gone into improving the continuity of scenes and enhancing the depth of emotional context. I expect that you should all have a much smoother ride going through the story next time. The primary edits are now submitted to the author, some of the edits have been implemented into the game already and we are working together to reach consensus on the others. This is just a quick update on editing status for the folks eagerly awaiting the next version. Howdy Y'all, Alako, to her current and future misadventure, has allowed me to help with the editing of this story/game. Now to find that second drunk scene, unless. I'm looking forward to more of your work. So either the inventory needs to be able to accomodate multiple pills of the same colour or the merchant needs a text option along the line "why not use your current stock before purchasing additional pills". If you buy more than one pill of the same colour from the shady merchant it will deduct the credits from your total, but you won't get another pill if you already have that colour in your inventory. The only bug I could find is a pretty unimportant one. Though someone whose first language is English might be better suited for this since like you I'm not a native speaker when it comes to English. However, if you wish, i can go hunting for them. And you already put in the disclaimer at the beginning that English isn't your first language anyway. Nothing major and there are only a few of them. As far as game bugs and similar issues go, the spelling/grammar mistakes have already been adressed. I apologize if I sound patronizing and only talk about something you've already thought through. So far however you've made a good compromise since you don't seem to mix drawing styles in any given scene. (Yes, I read about your difficulties in finding pictures in the first post.) It's not a big issue, but it might reduce immersion if the drawing styles differ too much. ![]() And finding a picture that fits the scene in your head perfectly can be difficult even with the vast ressources the web supplies. I'm aware you go picture hunting and don't draw yourself. However, I have to admit that it took a bit of getting used to the various drawing styles of the pictures. I also like the way you sometimes hint what might happen to you if you do this or that in the conversations you overhear. Of course this means a lot more work for you in the writing department. It somewhat masks the sometimes pretty obvious "OK, if i do this it will trigger that and then.". In addition to increase said immersion I believe this actually adds to the suspense as well. I'm actually a fan of the idea that some answers are purely for roleplaying issues to increase the immersion and not every single answer has some sort of game impact. At least to someone like me who likes text based games. ![]() Drinks a lot of coffee and always has his smartphone on hand.I got to try your demo and I have to say this looks very promising. Settled down in a small closet on the ground floor. If you look closer however, everything will turn out to be much more complicated.Ĭhristian – a weird guy, who appeared in the store not too long ago. She comes back home late and drops on her bed to fall asleep instantly. At a glance, Evelyn can be taken for a successful entrepreneur. But in fact they need these creatures for a totally different reason…Įvelyn – the owner of the pet store. The government is hunting down the cats like Ginger, allegedly to save their population. She is endlessly thankful to her Mistress, who saved her from death’s clutches, so she does her best to be as helpful as she can. Ginger – a playful, mischievous and sometimes arrogant cat who works at the pet store. option to end the game without a romantic relationship.option to form a relationship either with a female (yuri) or with a male.every resident of the house has a secret.I’ll find out the truth behind it and make him disappear. Sometimes it feels far too suspicious to me. And we were doing well without his help anyway. Why did Mistress hire him? Usually she doesn’t fancy strangers in the least. Up till recently my wonderful life of leisure in the pet store ran its natural course, when suddenly a weird bozo appeared in the house. It’s so nice to live with the person you like, to have everything necessary for a good life, to depend on yourself and have a good time. ![]()
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